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G3ronimo
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 28 2006 15:38    
A new track, Rainy Sunday
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Have a listen and gimme tips for improvement plz ^^

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=3D24AF8920CC045C


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Frazze
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 28 2006 23:21    
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Okay.

1. About the kick: NO.
It needs more punch (noise) and less twump (bass), the kick should be the plusedriver not the main feature.

2. These some serious bassline issues. To little to late! The should be a nice synth bass line running along with the track. And it should definatly not be a offbeat bass.

3. I never though I'd say this but... It needs vocals or FX.

That said I kinda like this stuff. Great drums!


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G3ronimo
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29 2006 09:12    
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Frazze wrote:
Okay.

1. About the kick: NO.
It needs more punch (noise) and less twump (bass), the kick should be the plusedriver not the main feature.

2. These some serious bassline issues. To little to late! The should be a nice synth bass line running along with the track. And it should definatly not be a offbeat bass.

3. I never though I'd say this but... It needs vocals or FX.

That said I kinda like this stuff. Great drums!


all taken in consideration thx man Smile


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29 2006 15:53    
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i agree on the bassline, the kick i think is ok, the chilled out mood wouldnt suit a massive hammering kick. the percussion does indeed sound good.
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Ravana
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29 2006 16:01    
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I say nothing on this one.


http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

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G3ronimo
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29 2006 17:11    
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Ravana wrote:
I say nothing on this one.


ahw rav Sad

I love you... <3


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Ravana
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29 2006 17:28    
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G3ronimo wrote:

ahw rav Sad

I love you... <3

Aaaww...

1. Just boost at 4-6Khz and Frazze will be happy!

2. Indeed! What are you thinking man? Though I see some bass from almost the beginning. There could, however, be another, higher one, maybe?

3. Frazze is listening to some other track by you, I presume.

The mood is nice and the bassline fits that mood in a way. on my system I can hear the bass quite nicely, actually. I wouldn't necessarily wanna hear a punchy kick on this one. I think it would brake the somewhere-in-the-jungle-feeling. (yeah, actually I have nothing to say...)


http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

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Frazze
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29 2006 17:47    
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bigandymac wrote:
...the kick i think is ok, the chilled out mood wouldnt suit a massive hammering kick.

What i meant was that the kick twumped the hell out of my system. I don't like that.


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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 04 2006 23:53    
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Again expired...... Crying or Very sad




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G3ronimo
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 05 2006 09:00    
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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL wrote:
Again expired...... Crying or Very sad


lol be more active on the forums chiefy Razz


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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 05 2006 11:02    
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Yeah I´m sorry...

Actually I am when I´m at work...but there I cant listen to the tracks in the music section.

And when I´m at home I always forget doing it.

But Imma try harder Smile.




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G3ronimo
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 05 2006 15:00    
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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL wrote:
Yeah I´m sorry...

Actually I am when I´m at work...but there I cant listen to the tracks in the music section.

And when I´m at home I always forget doing it.

But Imma try harder Smile.


yay Very Happy go chiefy! go chiefy!


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