Goroner
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Joined: 27 Oct 2006
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 Posted: Sun Oct 29 2006 14:46
my first try |
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this is my first try and it is not complited and i upload it so i just wanna know what do you think for my stupid unfinished song 
here is the link:
http://www.mysharefile.com/v/8661826/New_Song.ogg.html
the format is too bad i couldnt upload the original wav cause it is like 10 mb and i hate to wait
so tell me what you think for that stupid song ^^
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Frazze
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Joined: 12 Apr 2004
Location: Lund, Sweden
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Posted: Sun Oct 29 2006 15:13
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Good: Sample quality, nothing is incredibly off.
Bad: The bass doesn't fit at all times. The lead seems kinda malplaced and doesn't work good with the rest. The panning is totaly f-ed up.
Can't realy say that much about your technical skills without the MT2. Did you use loops? |
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Goroner
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Joined: 27 Oct 2006
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Posted: Sun Oct 29 2006 16:08
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i only use cubase and i used trilogy kompakt my electric guitar + guitarrig effects and vanugard
and i know it is not so good so i need some guides if you can tell me some basics ill be gladd
and no loops used in it it is all my creation :DDD
my msn is goroner@hotmail.com
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Ravana
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Joined: 18 Nov 2005
Location: Oulu, Finland
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Posted: Sun Oct 29 2006 18:18
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Kinda funny to post it on MT forum I think... Anyways..
As said, sound quality is nice. Sounds clean. Panning on hihats, well, I dislike. The bass maybe is a bit too high on volume. i think it kind of hmm... Err... Don't know how to say it. But it should not be that way. In short it sounds like nice.. Something. Something monotonous. I think you then need some catchy chorus in there. The start is nice. Hmm, not very informative, but what can you do. |
http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php
http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php
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Goroner
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Joined: 27 Oct 2006
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Posted: Sun Oct 29 2006 20:02
im on it... |
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im remaking the pan of the hithat and i added pann on the lead
and ill rerecord the guitar -it is bit slow :S
other thing ill get the bass on lower volume
im on it and ill upload it so you tell me is it ok after i do it better
any way .... my first try
by the way the hithats dont pan on wav format when i made it ogg it started to pann --wierd  ill try other converter or maby wavlad ....
thx .. |
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G3ronimo
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Joined: 27 Dec 2005
Location: The Netherlands, Wezep
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Posted: Sun Oct 29 2006 22:49
Re: im on it... |
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| Goroner wrote: |
by the way the hithats dont pan on wav format when i made it ogg it started to pann --wierd ill try other converter or maby wavlad ....
thx .. |
try WinLame
song is quite nice.. the bass doesnt really fit the song though, the guitar sounds neat-o
panning of the hats is indeed horrible, fix it
you're on your way this being your first song |
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Goroner
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Goroner
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Posted: Sun Oct 29 2006 23:53
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and can u guys tell me where i can get some good 909 and 808 Vst kicks
thx... |
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-M-o-V-A-J-
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Joined: 05 Feb 2004
Location: Madrid&Barcelona, Spain
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Posted: Mon Oct 30 2006 08:30
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please use www.yousendit.com, i don't have much free time to spend some seconds waiting your song 
(or if your file is finished in MT2 or OGG Vorbis format use Elektromusika.es.mw!!! CLICK HERE)
well.... about your song (listening now "new_song_something_fixed.mp3")....
beats are like the classical pop/rock batery... well... sounds well, good kuality, but maybe you have to do more..."variety" on the rythm.. and play/run with lot's of hi/hats and crash...(playing with their volume, cutoff, and similar)...
bass... i don't know... it's always the same... i think doing some of "classic/rock" like your song, make good base/bass not as repetitive...
I think the best instr that sounds very well is the "lead guitar"...
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because all of that... this song is perfect to do the intro of some Guitar software, or maybe a video presentation or similar... have good cuality...
(but don't stop your music!!!) |
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G3ronimo
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Posted: Mon Oct 30 2006 12:50
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| Goroner wrote: | and can u guys tell me where i can get some good 909 and 808 Vst kicks
thx... |
use drumatic vst! |
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Goroner
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Joined: 27 Oct 2006
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Posted: Mon Oct 30 2006 14:46
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Thanks for advices and for the vst
cya all when i done it
any way i got madtracker and it seems to me that i get lost in it ^^ 
this track is made in cubase
and now im looking for cubase 4 seems there is no place i can download it because it is released not so long ago
thx... |
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Franklin van Uden
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Joined: 26 Apr 2005
Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Tue Oct 31 2006 09:22
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Cubase 4 u can buy , no problem at all ...
*Wondering why you post cubase stuff on the madtracker forum anyways, u can get by far more specific feedback about cubase producing on the cubase forums like http://www.cubase.net/phpbb2/ ... |
Music ... is endless ... Work in progress ...
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Goroner
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Joined: 27 Oct 2006
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Posted: Tue Oct 31 2006 14:32
ok... |
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Thx for redirecting me i didnt know that there is any program like madtracker i tought that madtracker is only forum for those who make music
my appologise again
i wont post sry
and thx again
thxxx.... |
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