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Ravana
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 05 2006 15:04    
It's coming closer to an end
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Howdy.

I'm trying to make some kind of a grand finale for Jolli's adventures and I now have the first part somehow in order. So any comments would be welcome.

The feeling is supposed to be important in this one so tell if you get any feelings out of it. Productional points are also welcomed.

Edit: updated the link.

http://www.mikseri.net/music/play.php?id=237418&type=dl


http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

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bigandymac
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 05 2006 21:56    
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here we go...

track starts off with something almost medieval sounding. then the (very real sounding) pianos come in. i like the chords and melodies, its very emotive. what are the pianos done with?
pads come in around 1:15 and are nice. not sure about the melody over the top of that, its a bit dischordant (no idea if thats a word). track starts to get a bit more sinister sounding, which is an interesting change. its an interesting song to listen to as its always changing, the chord sequece alters quite often as well.
it feels like the start of a much longer track, or an album. if i was writing this track, i would go into some glitch drums and then glitch them up even more using dblue glitch. then id bring in some big strings and things.
anyway, i love the piano part a lot. the offkey pads and melodies tinge the track with some interesting elements as well. i wish i had the patience to develop melodies that much, then again, thats why i make dance music, i can repeat what ive done over and over.

cheers

andy
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Breaker
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 05 2006 23:04    
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I thought you said it was going to be 9 min long o.0?? =p

Ow well the "short" 6 min will do =p

Anyway the piano is real nice in the start... and i really like the melodie at 1:30, it's sad... like something painfull just happened, and now hes walking somewhere alone, trying to realize what just happened...

i'm feeling the strings there...

On 2:13 a nice synty comes in, wich also has a sad character in it, wich comes back at min 5 again, like those parts...

I can see you put lots of effort on the track..overall real nice and sad athmospere...

Not my style... but you were lucky, i'm having a sad moment right now... i'm outta cookies...
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Ravana
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06 2006 08:31    
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@ Andy: What do you mean by dischordant? Off key? And yeah, it is supposed to be a start of a longer track, so you're right in that one.

Breaker: Yeah, it will hopefully be a long piece, this is just the first part. Sorry about the cookies mate, hope you can shop some more today Smile Thanks for the feeling interpretation too, that's quite close to what I'm aiming for.

Edit: Well here's the second part preview too. Go with the flow or something...

http://download.yousendit.com/69CEFBB61643F77B


http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

MT source files available if requested (maybe)
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hyoshira
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 09 2006 07:56    
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hey, im curious what this jollis adventure is...i would have downloaded a song that i saw once on here from you but it was like 9 mb long it seemed. but is this a book or what?
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Ravana
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 09 2006 08:20    
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hyoshira wrote:
hey, im curious what this jollis adventure is...i would have downloaded a song that i saw once on here from you but it was like 9 mb long it seemed. but is this a book or what?

Well no... It's just a storyline or consept I made up to accompany my music. So it's just a little tale which my music tells. Kind of. I haven't written the first parts in English, though.. I will probably when I finish this piece.


http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

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hyoshira
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 14 2006 13:03    
cool you should write in english
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well i think that would be nice if you could. then i could know more about it. if i can i will keep a look out for that.
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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 17 2006 14:32    
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Well the piano sounds great!
Very nice melody.

And it goes on like that.

I like strings a lot too.

All in all a very nice piece.

Andy is right...it takes patience to compose melodies you dont loop over and over Smile.

Very good job!




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Ravana
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 17 2006 20:22    
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Okay I must say I have no idea what the heck are you talking about, Andy-Man and Chiefie, erh, dude. I think the piano is very repetitive. I suck at playing and am lazy at programming, that's why. But anyways, glad if it sounds like okay to someone at least. Thanks for listening.


http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

MT source files available if requested (maybe)
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