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Breaker
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Joined: 12 Feb 2006
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Psalm 97
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Joined: 24 Dec 2006
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Posted: Wed Jan 10 2007 22:54
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Fine tune the panning in the first part. Is too erratic, too disconcerting.
Otherwise, good tune. If that's the only thing I can fine wrong with it, perfectionist that I am, you're way too cool.  |
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bigandymac
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Joined: 18 Nov 2004
Location: Leeds UK
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Posted: Wed Jan 10 2007 23:26
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really like some of the melodies in this tune, especially around 2:40.
everything is great apart from the beat imo, dont like the samples youve used really. but thats my taste. |
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Nine
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Joined: 11 Nov 2005
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Posted: Thu Jan 11 2007 22:18
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The beat 'problem' is my fault I guess, Saturn is a really good friend of mine and he made the first part of this song on my computer, with beat samples on my computer hehe. And I don't really have good beat samples, sorry Saturn
Well, some critics from me. Some parts I haven't heard yet, are quite nice. I really love the structure in your song and admire it, nice automation too. Although I think it's a little too long, but not annoying long, because it's not über boring or something. The melody really sticks in my head and won't come out. That is a good thing ofcourse
In short: A good tune, one of your best so far. |
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Frazze
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Joined: 12 Apr 2004
Location: Lund, Sweden
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Posted: Fri Jan 12 2007 18:03
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A solid 80'ies sound.
I feel this song should either have more melodies and prehaps vocals or be tuned down by useing a less prominent beat. I think now it's an okay listening song, but not a great one as I think it could be. If the drums didn't take so much attention it would be a nice chill tune.
Eh... I'm not getting my point though, hope you get it. Nice going.  |
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Breaker
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Joined: 12 Feb 2006
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Posted: Fri Jan 12 2007 23:50
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@ psalm 97: thnx dude
@ Andy, Nine, Frazze:
thnx, hehe i overdid it a little with the drums =P...
May tone them down a bit
I was going for a Flying steps kinda tune (to breakdance on =P) definitely going to do more attempts  |
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