StyrmanLjungberg
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 Posted: Fri Aug 25 2006 19:27
Something completley new! |
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Ok. So first of all I just want to say that this is not an official release yet  So please don't spread it^^
Becaus I'm having it in a compo and the songs can't be released if they are to compete. But the rules say nothing of letting your cool internet pals check it out and give some constructive comments on it before! ;D
http://styrman.madtracker.net/In%20Your%20Eyes.mp3
Please tell me what you think! It's a completley new genre for me. I've also decided to go under the name Captain. For the time being! ;D |
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Breaker
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Posted: Fri Aug 25 2006 20:55
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awesome  i really like it, love the drums ! |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Fri Aug 25 2006 21:01
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Thanks m8  |
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Frazze
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Posted: Fri Aug 25 2006 21:13
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A decent track. It lacks the cleanness and crisp be so simple. And it lacks the melody variety to be this fluffy (can't find a better way to put it). I think its the rodes and that the bass is to loud. Its technicly quite good but it doesn't get to me. Sorry. |
http://www.last.fm/music/8ism |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Fri Aug 25 2006 21:19
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No need to apologize for your oppinions! 
Could you define cleanness and crisp.. if you mean cleanness = clean then that's how I wanted it to be. Kinda dirty^^
And yeah, after listening through it a couple of times I've noticed that the bass at least is too loud. And the hats too.
And regarding the melody, I view it more as a "mood-song" then a "melody-song" ;P |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Fri Aug 25 2006 21:32
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Oh, and I forgot to tell.
Some parts make disted noises after the mp3-encoding. I'll redo it later when^^ |
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Ravana
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Posted: Sat Aug 26 2006 04:22
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Hmm yeah, the bass hurts ears at those certain notes, but otherwise it's okay. This is mostly a problem at the beginning and at the end. In the middle the situation gets a bit better.
I like the melody. Repetitiveness doesn't matter if it works, and this works for me. Melancholy always rocks, doesn't it. The vocals also bring some more atmosphere. The mood is broken unfortunately in the middle. It's still sad, but in a different way. The middle is like we-have-no-water-we-are-gonna-die-of-thirst whereas the other stuff is we-are-riding-this-bus-till-eternity. Ehm... Yeah. |
http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php
http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php
MT source files available if requested (maybe) |
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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL
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Posted: Sat Aug 26 2006 14:42
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This song brings some kind of melancholic athmosphere, which I like a lot.
The drum arrangement roxxxx!!!
I like that the most in this song.
I gotta agree about the bass....did you forget to cut it in the break?
Nice melodies...
I like that production and in fact I like the whole song! |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Sat Aug 26 2006 14:58
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Thanks for the great comments!
I'll fix the bass! Thanks for pointing that out. I guess I either forgot it or my speakers suck haha! |
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Frazze
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Posted: Sun Aug 27 2006 12:44
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| StyrmanLjungberg wrote: | | Could you define cleanness and crisp.. if you mean cleanness = clean then that's how I wanted it to be. Kinda dirty^^ |
What I was trying to say is that the songs too muddy for my taste. I don't know if thats what you mean by dirt (which I asociate with lo-fi and distortion). |
http://www.last.fm/music/8ism |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Sun Aug 27 2006 20:20
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I've updated the file now after some reworking. Hope it doesn't hurt your ears now ;P And hope I didn't screw something else up
btw, what genre would you place this is? Synt pop? ^^ |
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Frazze
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Breaker
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Posted: Sun Aug 27 2006 21:51
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| StyrmanLjungberg wrote: |
btw, what genre would you place this is? Synt pop? ^^ |
Rap |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Sun Aug 27 2006 22:22
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Hmm.? You think? ^^
@Frazze: Glad it's better ^_^ |
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Breaker
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Posted: Sun Aug 27 2006 22:25
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lol no actually i was joking i have no idea |
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