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Jimm
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02 2006 19:56    
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This song is going absolutely nowhere. I know I've got to add/change something in a few places, but I haven't the slightest idea where to go other than that. The last eight bars, as you might notice, are just kind of sitting there, waiting for something. Curse my ineptitude!!!! ARGH!!!

Any ideas, anyone?

P.S. if you listen to the drums closely, you might hear what sounds like the words "Pumpernickel Bread." Razz
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Ravana
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02 2006 22:41    
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Jimm, it seems like you need the IRC already. Krhhm.

Well actually I have no ideas at all, I'm just being a wise-ass, but... I mean, it's like, 1:16 long! What on earth would you like there to happen in one minute? In my opinion I kind of hear it continue quite like that one minute more and then a break or something. But then on the other hand, I have no idea about the particular style.

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

MT source files available if requested (maybe)
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Jimm
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 03 2006 00:58    
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Keep in mind this is the forum, not the IRC... Wink

But I suppose I'll retreat to my self-imposed exile and work through it.

Still, though, if anyone else has any hints etc, I'll be glad to hear them.
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Frazze
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 03 2006 19:10    
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Personaly i would choose a break introducing either a leadsynth with a more melodicly based theme or a lot of pads. I'd also consider to change the kick. This one feels clicky for this song.

Like the track, cool feel. Smile

http://www.last.fm/music/8ism
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Pablo
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 04 2006 12:05    
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Defenetly a lead synth! ..and i agree the kick is too hard but...and i like the robot style lirycs do more with them !
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Jimm
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 04 2006 18:10    
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Thanks guys Smile

Changed the kick, working on a lead synth right now. And don't worry, I'll definitely use those vocals again Wink
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