nice track. i recognise those pads from factors compo entry.
the melodies are nice, i like the stuttering effect youve put in.
also the piano (with resonance?) is cool.
could do with some more variation of the breaks, develop them through the track, or have a break or something. they started to get uninteresting towards the end (despite all the variations in the melodies etc).
1. When the pad plays alone the transicion between the notes aren't smooth enough.
2. Beat lacks power - volume and high- and lowfqs.
3. Chime = not good. Breaks the mood.