StyrmanLjungberg
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StyrmanLjungberg
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 Posted: Sun Jul 23 2006 18:21
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*shameless bump*
at least say you hate it!  |
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robedwards99
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Location: Dorset, UK
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Posted: Sun Jul 23 2006 19:10
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Honestly.
It is a perfect little platform game intro tune! However....
Get rid of the reversed snare during the melody throughout the song. Leave it in the drum solo if you like as something different to the rest of the song.
Certainly get rid of the key change towards the end, to me that sounds very amatuer.
I hope you don't mind my honesty with what I have said. Others may say differently.  |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Sun Jul 23 2006 19:25
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I love honesty! 
The key change may be amatuerish but it's there to:
1. Fill out some time
2. Make it a little more cheesey!
Hmm.. I like the rev snares, I think the add to the groove, but that's me. Maybe I can lower the volume on 'em a bit.. |
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Jimmy Åkerlund
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Posted: Wed Jul 26 2006 12:13
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cool track man i liked it happy song |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Wed Jul 26 2006 15:09
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Thanks dude! 
I tried to make it.. summerish.. and dreamy. I think I succeeded At least a little |
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G3ronimo
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Nine
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Inge
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Posted: Fri Jul 28 2006 10:12
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I love it! It makes me think of the older work of Aphex Twin, where he mixed up weird melodies with strange beats and uptempo rhythms. Please expand this song to make it something complete, including a bridge or whatsoever. |
Care for a game of Monopoly? |
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SoulEye
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Sun Jul 30 2006 16:10
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| Inge wrote: | | I love it! It makes me think of the older work of Aphex Twin, where he mixed up weird melodies with strange beats and uptempo rhythms. Please expand this song to make it something complete, including a bridge or whatsoever. |
Thanks!
Don't I have a bridge or something? Haha..
I can't figure out anything more to do with it.. :/ |
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bigandymac
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Location: Leeds UK
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Posted: Wed Aug 02 2006 10:27
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what a desperately happy song. not much to say on it really, there are some interesting things going on, and its too happy to criticise.
you should eq the whole thing though to bring out the high frequencies a bit.
cheers
andy |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Wed Aug 02 2006 20:12
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| bigandymac wrote: | what a desperately happy song. not much to say on it really, there are some interesting things going on, and its too happy to criticise.
you should eq the whole thing though to bring out the high frequencies a bit.
cheers
andy |
Thanks!
I tried to raise the higher fewqs on the main lead, but then it disted.. :S
Maybe I can do it on the whole track..
What more I need to do is to EQ the base and kick so that they dont "collide".. the lower freq's are real muddy.. |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Location: Östersund, Sweden
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Posted: Sun Aug 13 2006 00:23
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It's updated now!
Any difference? :> |
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OneUp
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Location: Norrköping, Sweden
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Posted: Mon Aug 14 2006 17:59
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Ah, really happy and nice tune mate!
And the "melodifestival"-key change totally fits |
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