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New Track [check it out]

Nine
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Joined: 11 Nov 2005

Posted: Sat Sep 09 2006 15:50 New Track [check it out]
Actually i've been working on this one for a while now and I still have problems with the structure. Please listen and give me structure tips, and offcourse you can rate the song as well. Thanks. http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=15E614992C5FE81F
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Ravana
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Joined: 18 Nov 2005
Location: Oulu, Finland

Posted: Sat Sep 09 2006 18:12
Hmm.. Maybe put some breakbeatish beat there at the break? Yeah I know, quite basic idea, but if you'd put just some small stuff there, it would maybe sound good. But I don't think I have any other ideas. Don't make it much longer, though. Hmm, and there's a lot of high stuff.. Maybe I would like them just a tiny bit lower.
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G3ronimo
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Joined: 27 Dec 2005
Location: The Netherlands, Wezep

Posted: Sat Sep 09 2006 22:13
really like the high stuff (srry rav ) indeed a breakbeatish kinda thing would fit very good with it... eehm... put a gater over the low kinda base thingy
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-M-o-V-A-J-
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Joined: 05 Feb 2004
Location: Madrid&Barcelona, Spain

Posted: Sun Sep 10 2006 09:37
really good sounds!! starting synths (and effects), are really well sounding. I like the "plip" light sound. perhaps batery is too "old sound" for that "future synth" (only my opinion) maybe you have to use more "cleaned" kick, snare and similar. I don't know how VST have you use on it, but I think you have to go inside Classic Eq, and others VSTeffects to do more cleaned and envolving sounds. but, in general, good "basic idea"
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Franklin van Uden
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Joined: 26 Apr 2005
Location: The Netherlands

Posted: Sun Sep 10 2006 10:28
This is one of the first tracks i've heard from you and the theme is quite relaxing, i like that. The beat programming is a bit weak, but nothing that could be easly fixed, as ravana said a breakbeat could do the trick, as for or some little fill ups in the beat to make the beat a bit more intresting. The basskick is to weak too , try to layer up a second basskick with a bit more kick in it (like a drumatic kick), what i didn't fancy to much is the tom like basskick u used @ 2:35, it sound a bit too thin for my taste. The high regions.., put some (automated) filter on the the gated pads and maybe on the arp sound , automate it so these elements get more intresting. Final suggestion would be a second sub bassline to complement the beat and give the track some thicker/warmer sound. (a simple offsync bassline made with triangle.) Overall i think the track is nice, good work so far !
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Nine
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Joined: 11 Nov 2005

Posted: Sun Sep 10 2006 22:42
Thanks for the support guys. Maybe I'll finish this sometime. But for now, I'll will check it out for the future.
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-M-o-V-A-J-
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Joined: 05 Feb 2004
Location: Madrid&Barcelona, Spain

Posted: Mon Sep 11 2006 07:28

Nine wrote:

[...] for now, I'll will check it out for the future. Wink

good idea! Razz

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