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jumar1987
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Joined: 08 Mar 2006
PostPosted: Mon Sep 11 2006 18:49    
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I guess it sounds pretty dntel-ish.

I would really appreciate any critism regarding, I guess, I don't know, just ways I can improve the piece.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=34EF9D8C30D9AC65

It's in .ogg format, because I've yet to purchase the full version of MadTracker. Sad

So yeah, tell me what you think.
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Ravana
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Joined: 18 Nov 2005
Location: Oulu, Finland
PostPosted: Mon Sep 11 2006 19:33    
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I searched the forums with the word "criticism" and this came out. Well hold your horses just one minute longer!

Well just for starters, it just sucks. I mean, totally. No, not really. It's quite nice, pleasant mood follows throughout. Because of the length the monotonineness (how the heck do you write that?) doesn't bother me that much. The kick is nice and soft, which I like always. The tempo kind of makes it a bit happier maybe. You could also try putting there some REALLY subtle barely audible breakbeatish thingie. Could work. Hmm, for me the lead-thingies come into play in a too late stage, I would've liked them earlier.

Well I guess everyone else has more productional viewpoints than I do.

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

MT source files available if requested (maybe)
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