OneUp
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-M-o-V-A-J-
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Posted: Tue Sep 26 2006 13:08
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Come on!!
Kick&bass seems to be welcomingm whenever:P!
Maybe the "trush" (snare sound) are too "old"...let's see.. too many duty and noisy (ok ok, I always say the same, but I don't like that too "old sounding noisy" samples/intruments).
Synth melody are good, perfect "lineal" melody, and the "plip/soft synth background" makes good kicking melody.
Maybe you have to listen it (and other of your songs) in a Good Equalizer, to see the high reverberation and excitation.
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Maybe put a Compressor(the best and simply I think is the E-Phonic Compressor) on MASTER track (if you have you MadTracker to do it! ) |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Posted: Tue Sep 26 2006 14:23
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I like it!
A good "Throw your head like crazy at a club"-song!  |
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bigandymac
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Posted: Tue Sep 26 2006 14:47
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the 1st 14 seconds i was incredibly impressed. the percussion roll, the kick, the pad sweeps, all fantastic. i thought it was going to launch into some really moody hard techno.
it didnt unfortunately. the track isnt bad from there on. the percussion is good (i like the clap). the bassline is pretty nice, although there needs to be some big sub bass in there i think.
production wise, there is loads of clipping, get inspector and have a look. the other problem is the track is too bright, the synths are too loud and the perc eq'd too much in the high freqs.
other than that though its cool. i just wish it was the techno track it sounded like it was going to be. |
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G3ronimo
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Posted: Tue Sep 26 2006 15:16
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Okey I agree with andy.. till 1.14 its awesome, but after that, it just kinda looses grip or something.. I dunno
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Frazze
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Posted: Tue Sep 26 2006 15:23
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I miss the lyrics from the orignal song - so nerdy... so great...
Nice work anyways but that compession sure would be nice. |
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OneUp
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Posted: Tue Sep 26 2006 15:43
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Ok, thx for all that (flaming but necessary) response.
This was made in just one evening, so it's not surprising.
Yes, mastering has always been my weak spot. With a rather shitty soundcard and earplugs it isn't always easy. I will look into the things y'all said.
Frazze: Yes, lyrics are cool, but that song! Truly awful!
They might be a great band with another singer. |
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bigandymac
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Posted: Tue Sep 26 2006 15:55
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i think my post came across more negatively than it was meant to. i like the track a lot, the intro just threw me off what the rest of the track developed into. |
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OneUp
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Posted: Tue Sep 26 2006 16:57
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Goddamn, listening to it on another computer right now. You were really right about the clipping and eq'ing.
bigandymac: Yes, understood that, thx mate  |
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D Vibe
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Posted: Wed Sep 27 2006 13:55
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Ooh! That's a classic song! Got to listen to it when I come home from work ..
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D Vibe
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Posted: Wed Sep 27 2006 17:48
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Listening to your tune right now..
There's a bit too strong high frequencies!
The other one's that've written in this topic is kind of right that when the theme comes up around 1.30 minutes the tune lose a bit of the drive that was in the intro..
Good work, anyway . Nothing beats the original song though
Greets
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cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL
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Posted: Wed Sep 27 2006 20:22
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Good work!
Gotta agree with the mastering.
I don´t know the original tune...but the title itself is cool "Never trust a Klingon"...lol.
I like the part that starts at 2:14 the most!
Made in one evening?
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Jimmy Åkerlund
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Posted: Thu Oct 05 2006 20:34
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Great track m8:)
realy that club feeling, but i think the drums are a bit bad mastered, the clap is abit to much "pitched" or how to say.
but the other drums sounds great
well you use some cool synths in there too, i like that.
Great song! =)
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