Amok
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elijahlucian
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Posted: Wed Jan 30 2008 17:02
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hmmm sounds vaguely familiar. but i cant pick it out.. i give up. |
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Amok
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Frazze
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Posted: Thu Jan 31 2008 01:41
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+ Cool sound and arrangements for the bassline
- The kick sounds distant, A more powerful one with more mid-frequencies.
- It's all a bit empty the bass needs more punch. |
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Amok
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Posted: Thu Jan 31 2008 05:41
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Frazze wrote: | + Cool sound and arrangements for the bassline
- The kick sounds distant, A more powerful one with more mid-frequencies.
- It's all a bit empty the bass needs more punch. |
Thanks for your helpful comment. I was thinking the same and im still looking for better drum-samples (Kicks, Snares, HHs ...)
I will add some FX in the background...
Just wanted to know, if the track isnt complete crap.  |
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Vincent.V.
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Posted: Fri Feb 01 2008 02:08 Re: Who knows? |
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Na also, geht doch stell dich nicht so unter den scheffel
Sounds good... maybe you should play a little bit with the percussion, some additional drums (snare)
would be fine
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Amok
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Posted: Fri Feb 01 2008 07:36
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Danke Vincent. Ich glaube, so langsam komme ich dahinter...
Thx, Vincent. I will try to add some snares too. |
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Amok
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Posted: Sun Feb 03 2008 02:13
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Just tried to improve the old version:
- added a 2nd Kick for more Mid-Range
- tried to give the bassline more punch
- tweaked the backround bass-string
- tried to "clean" the lead (Alpha-VSTīs sound dirty imo...)
- tried to make the intro more interesting
http://home.arcor.de/sternchen1275/Amok%20-%20Bionic%20DanceTEST.mp3
I tried to add some snares, but it screwed the song up. Sorry Vince...
When i export the song to .ogg format, i get crackles, which i dont have in mt2. sorry for that.
BTW: @Frazze & Vincent: you seem to be the only one who help us noobs to improve our skills. thank you...
BTW 2:Frazze, you was right. Drumatic sucks... |
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Amok
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Amok
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Posted: Wed Feb 06 2008 00:32
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OMG... never expected such feedback... they say its "GOOD"!!!!
Not bad, after a "little" break of 17(!) years....  |
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