for normal the track is already finished, but i´m not happy about some parts l8er in the track, so i wanna give you first a small preview that ends at the point where i start beeing not so happy and i still work on.
Sounds quite good to me.
I also like the Part with the lead synth and the breakbeat a lot.
I couldnt say what you could improve or how you could go on.
But maybe you should bring back that breakbeat again once more.
It really kicks me!
hmm i had a listen to your tune. i am not that big a fan of te trance sound to be honest, but it's pretty cool. not much room for improvement i reckon except maybe slightly louder hi-hats?