Lord_Nighthawk
Registered User

Joined: 06 Feb 2007
Location: Germany
|
Posted: Thu Aug 21 2008 21:03 TNP-DND |
 |
hi there,
tried some other style, base is already finished, some finetuning is still in progress.
feedback would be nice if this is somehow usable in the style it actually exists.
http://tnp.madtracker.net/TNP_DND.mp3
nighty |
|
|
Back to top |
|
 |
meikom
Registered User

Joined: 20 Aug 2004
Location: Germany
|
Posted: Sat Aug 23 2008 09:20
|
 |
Very cool! I like it!
You're missing out of some nice vocals, ain't ya?
I can imagine a female voice singing the lead melody at 1:53. Furthermore it's totally usable for a hard style rap ontop of it. Totally kewl! Made for the charts! |
|
|
Back to top |
|
 |
Lord_Nighthawk
Registered User

Joined: 06 Feb 2007
Location: Germany
|
Posted: Sat Aug 23 2008 17:26
|
 |
thx for your feedback, glad you like it
yep, you´re right, some vocals are missing. for myself, "the prodigy" put a bit a stamp on my life, so no big text, more some kind of hitting one shout text would be nice (i´m the firestarter, smack my bitch up....whatever)
for my poor this would be no problem for me to record myself, but i never get any ideas for such one-shout-textes  |
|
|
Back to top |
|
 |
meikom
Registered User

Joined: 20 Aug 2004
Location: Germany
|
Posted: Sun Aug 24 2008 11:31
|
 |
Lord_Nighthawk wrote: | for my poor this would be no problem for me to record myself, but i never get any ideas for such one-shout-textes |
I like creating texts and it's easy to me. Let's see what comes to my mind:
0:14
TRACED!
0:17
You don't see my FACE!
0:21
TRACED!
0:24
...in this massive maze...
0:42
try to get me,
I play hard,
no chance to see,
for you to start,
When I go off,
You panic on,
I'll get my stuff,
and you'll be gone.
And Then again,
Down in the dark,
I stand my man,
Like a shark,
Dangerous - Sniffing blood,
fighting you - to leave my hood,
[...] to be continued....
What do you think? |
|
|
Back to top |
|
 |
meikom
Registered User

Joined: 20 Aug 2004
Location: Germany
|
Posted: Sun Aug 24 2008 11:48
|
 |
1:52 (female voice)
Here comes the man, who can't be defeated,
specialized - for getting in your mind.
Here comes the hero who can't be beaten,
electrified - for sparking through the night.
[...] also to be continued...  |
|
|
Back to top |
|
 |
Lord_Nighthawk
Registered User

Joined: 06 Feb 2007
Location: Germany
|
Posted: Sun Aug 24 2008 22:11
|
 |
lol, not bad m8
but i have to say that i tried a short sing-in but my voice is not that way successful for a bigger bunch of lyrics then just one sentence.
maybe i find a singer one day... |
|
|
Back to top |
|
 |
meikom
Registered User

Joined: 20 Aug 2004
Location: Germany
|
Posted: Sun Aug 24 2008 22:31
|
 |
Lord_Nighthawk wrote: | lol, not bad m8
but i have to say that i tried a short sing-in but my voice is not that way successful for a bigger bunch of lyrics then just one sentence.
maybe i find a singer one day... |
I'd do that for you, but I neither have a proper mic at the moment nor a place to record silently... |
|
|
Back to top |
|
 |
|
|