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G3ronimo
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 29 2006 19:05    
Finnished/stuck/nothing
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http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=11CE34AC09DC93E2

I dunno... do you?


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Ravana
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 29 2006 19:32    
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No I don't. I guess other people can tell you what they wanna hear in it, so I say just "do as you like".


http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

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Franklin van Uden
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 29 2006 21:24    
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listening ...

hmm, i would say first off all lose the preset zeta arp and come with some own creativity, it sureley would make the track more original, just try to follow the pads you started with Wink, the synth is nice though , i love bleepz Wink

Pump up the bassline, the subbass is nice, maybe a second bassline would spice things up a bit.
The beat i like it is just fine for the feeling of the track maybe a bit reverb or delay (just a little bit on the percs), introduce some pads when the main lead starts together with a simple arp on a lower octave comparing to the lead.

for the buildup use something simple like intro-bridge-couplet-bridge-chorus-outro.

Experiment a bit and have fun with it Smile

Franklin


Music ... is endless ... Work in progress ...

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G3ronimo
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 29 2006 22:07    
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Franklin van Uden wrote:
listening ...

hmm, i would say first off all lose the preset zeta arp and come with some own creativity, it sureley would make the track more original, just try to follow the pads you started with Wink, the synth is nice though , i love bleepz Wink

Pump up the bassline, the subbass is nice, maybe a second bassline would spice things up a bit.
The beat i like it is just fine for the feeling of the track maybe a bit reverb or delay (just a little bit on the percs), introduce some pads when the main lead starts together with a simple arp on a lower octave comparing to the lead.

for the buildup use something simple like intro-bridge-couplet-bridge-chorus-outro.

Experiment a bit and have fun with it Smile

Franklin


lawl yeah got rid of the z3ta it was a bit to obvious right Razz?... hmm.. hmm.. good tips working .. ^^


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Breaker
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 29 2006 23:12    
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It was chilling, this is what i would do:

Try to make the pads more clear, its hard to hear difference between the notes. (change the parameters a bit (i'm also learning to do that Smile )

Really try to add more variation, if you only add 1 hithat every 2 patterns its a bit boring to listen to...

keep working on it =)
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