Music talk

First finished song in... what, nine months?

Jimm
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Location: Inwood, Manitoba, Canada

Posted: Sat Oct 28 2006 19:07 First finished song in... what, nine months?
Yep yep yep. It's a song, from me. It doesn't sound at all polished, I only used about 3 instruments, I didn't work very hard on it, it's only a few minutes long... but hey! It's done! Why did I make such a song, you ask? Well, mainly to inspire me, and to prove (to myself, mostly) that I COULD ACTUALLY finish a song. Let's hope I continue to do so!! http://jimm_the_dog.madtracker.net/mp3/Secret.mp3 It was really supposed to be just a secret... but oh well. I guess I can let you guys listennnnn.... P.S. It's quite cheerful. Glum people beware. It also sounds better if you're listening to it on the beautiful Technics RP-DH1200 headphones, or if you can't afford those, with a bit of a bass boost. Enjoy!

Goroner
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Joined: 27 Oct 2006

Posted: Sun Oct 29 2006 16:48 Re: First finished song in... what, nine months?
i could add something here i tryed to open it in explorer seems to me that i cant hear it ^^ or download it so i opened it with firefox it is working it is quicktime i just want to tell every one that couldnt hear it use firefox and got quicktime instaled good track hihi seems to me like realy basic sounds like on nintendo ^^ hihi but cool

Franklin van Uden
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Joined: 26 Apr 2005
Location: The Netherlands

Posted: Tue Oct 31 2006 16:15
Hey hmm not much of feedback on this one ... poor Jimm Listening ... very dry start, nice 303 stylish bassline, melody/arp comes in , reminds me very much of "amiga demo" type song which isn't a bad thing at all if u are aiming for that! It sounds very happy, nice melody progression. Nice transition @ 1:20. Nice beat progression at 1:52. Improvements: I would add some reverb and delays to give the song more depth, maybe some widening on the higher regions. Get rid of the fade out end , try to give it some nice creative endings. well i hope this is of any help
Music ... is endless ... Work in progress ...

Elijah
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Joined: 20 Jan 2004
Location: Calgary, Alberta, Canada Eh?

Posted: Wed Nov 01 2006 01:25
hey man, nice song i love it exactly how it is... EXCEPT the end. like he said.. do something more creative... or something. but i can deal with it. because its finished.
- Elijah

Jimm
Registered User

Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Location: Inwood, Manitoba, Canada

Posted: Thu Nov 02 2006 00:10
Haha, yeah, the ending... I just kind of wanted it to be done, no hassle, kind of thing. But I'll try to change it up, seeing as how I'm INSPIYAAAAD!!!

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