hey.. i just listend your tack, but its not realy my cup of tea!! its worked out nice and its quality stuff.. which starts of nice, relaxing and peaceful. nice sounds used too in the first half..
but then..
the second half:
i realy realy realy dont like the second half at all. way too melodic and trancy for me apart from the fact that the synths and sounds which you used to play your melody and stuff with are technically seen ok.
The only negative thing to me is the length of the song.
You start with a cool intro, the synths come in and the track ends.
Okay you remixed a track with the same song structure and it seems like the original track itself wasnt done yet.
You could have extended the track and make something of 6 to 7 minutes.
I mean dont get me wrong: u did a good job but to me it seems like we have an unfinished original and an unfinished remix.
I´m not criticising cause I dont like it but I am cause I would have loved to hear a longer piece of this with that intro....the appearance of that synths....a break....synths again etc.