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OneUp
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Location: Norrköping, Sweden

Posted: Fri Nov 10 2006 00:19 OneUp - November
A little softer than usual, maybe a hint of melodic. Still pumping and danceable though. Slightly melancholic autumn tune was the intention. http://hem.passagen.se/tigerwookie/oneup_-_november.mp3 Right-click -> Save As!
Last edited by OneUp on Fri Nov 10 2006 09:38; edited 2 times in total

bigandymac
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Location: Leeds UK

Posted: Fri Nov 10 2006 00:28
link dont work pal.

OneUp
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Posted: Fri Nov 10 2006 00:30
Stupid of me... Now it does!

Ravana
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Location: Oulu, Finland

Posted: Fri Nov 10 2006 09:36

OneUp wrote:

Stupid of me... Now it does!

I suck at Swedish, but I get this one: "Sidan existerar inte längre på denna server." Wink

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php

MT source files available if requested (maybe)

OneUp
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Posted: Fri Nov 10 2006 09:40

Ravana wrote:

OneUp wrote:

Stupid of me... Now it does!

I suck at Swedish, but I get this one: "Sidan existerar inte längre på denna server." Wink

On my computer, it opens in Winamp automatically.
Right click -> Save as...
Third time lucky (as we do not really say in sweden)

Ravana
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Posted: Fri Nov 10 2006 09:42
Okay yeah, I had to allow JavaScript... Edit: Whoa, nice start. Did I always love these kind of kick-bass intros or what!? Minimalistic, a bit at least. Hmm, have you gone back in time with this one.. I like the kick yes. Nice drive here. The melody gives bit of an epic feeling. Somehow the end of the break doesn't sound so okay to me. It's either too long, too short or.. Something. You haven't broken new grounds, but made some decent quality stuff nonetheless.
http://www.mikseri.net/artists/thejollynekromanseri.51046.php http://www.mikseri.net/artists/bewaretheconstruct.62202.php MT source files available if requested (maybe)

Franklin van Uden
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Location: The Netherlands

Posted: Fri Nov 10 2006 14:18
Nice start although the intro is a bit repetive , maybe u should experiment a bit with some filtering to make it less static, just a thought though. The melody is cool , reminds me a bit of the happy house stuff we had in the mid 90-ies over here in holland (hope i don't offend u with that ) Sound quality is nice 2, i like the telephone (?) sample u used , i wouldn't expect a telephone ring in a track like this , original and seems to work 2! love the little beat breaks u made , i would get rid of the drum rolls and stick to the beat breaks coz they rule ! Overall a very nice track , tight production ... keep it up !
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OneUp
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Posted: Fri Nov 10 2006 15:27
Thx for the comments guys! Hmm... back in times and mid 90-ies... not what I was trying, but hey, wasn't everything better in the good old days? Franklin: Telephone? Exactly where do you find a telephone in this? Ahh... now I see what you mean... that fill! Yeah, quite nice, found a (rather expensive) sample CD, that is the shit! Keep it coming

bigandymac
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Location: Leeds UK

Posted: Sun Nov 12 2006 14:20
like the kick and the stereo enhanced bassline. the intro is a little dry and empty. you need to use more delays and reverbs to fill it all up. the arp breakdown is nice, but again a bit empty, maybe boost the volume of the pads, or octave the arp. overall the track is nice, but it sounds incomplete. if i was making it i would add in a couple more layers of bass, a sub bass off beat layer and a band pass (automated) layer above the bass you have atm. then id add in more percussion, as atm its a bit basic. the clap is a bit weak so i'd boost it or layer it with a snare, id play around with the automation of the arps and the lead. structure is functional so id probably leave that. over everything id stick some high melody that would fill up the freq range a little. anyway, its a nice track (particularly the wide bass), with a bouncy feeling to it and i hope my tips are of some help. cheers andy

StyrmanLjungberg
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Location: Östersund, Sweden

Posted: Sun Nov 12 2006 23:31
Nice tune! I like it.

cHiEfRoCkA 4 ReaL
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Location: Germany

Posted: Fri Nov 17 2006 17:09
Wow! Definately worth to be played in a club! I can´t go deeper to the details cause to me the kicks, bassline etc work. Reminds me of my good old Techno/trance era. Thumbs up!

-M-o-V-A-J-
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Location: Madrid&Barcelona, Spain

Posted: Mon Nov 20 2006 09:18
perfect... Well... i hope you make more techno-trance like that!! Good good song.. perfect beat, power kick (non distorsion!)... the melody starting well.. good.. some repetitive, but good:P... but the "silence" and tue cutoff melody.. and growing growing...PERFECT:P!! <<-->> i would like to know what kind os VST have you use... i'm intereting overwall in the "double" bass y'd use... is a sample or a VSTi?? appart, have you use any VSTeq or similar?? <<-->> Appart from that... WHEN CAN I PUT YOUR Techo/Trance (and similar) song in elektromusika.es.mw????? please!! jeje You're growing..don't stop!!
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OneUp
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Posted: Thu Nov 23 2006 18:38
-M-o-V-A-J-: Thx VST is mainly z3ta+. Like it a lot. The bass is a sample. A cool trick I found out for making the bass and other samples to sound that stereo-fat, is to use the delay thing in the "sample view" window. Sample must be in stereo. Surely many of you know this already... You can put them there m8!

Frazze
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Location: Lund, Sweden

Posted: Thu Nov 23 2006 22:10
It's quite good but I think the minimalism is a bit much. It feels empty to me. The pad could be a bit thicker. Well it's not what I normaly listen to so maybe it's just me.
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