i like it. the tune itself is nice, and the chorus is catchy.
the vocal is a few dB to loud in the mix, in places it takes over completely and you lose the harmony of the bass and melody as a result.
other than that its cool
This tune has much potential. The lyrics some time sounds a little "gnälliga" if put it in swedish. Almost all sounds and samples in this song I think can be pimped up a tad. Something can be added to the lyrics perhaps. And maybe a female voice somewhere could be cool?
The sounds are too wimpy in the sense of power and character, i.e they are plainly boring (except for the organ ofc). The drums can be improved (though not by me), and lyrics can be spiced up.
btw, is this song a little long? I would cut it one minute or so
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