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Lord_Nighthawk
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Joined: 06 Feb 2007
Location: Germany
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Posted: Sun May 27 2007 08:47 TNP - Nautical |
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hi there,
maybe it looks like i create every week a new song but ... well, thats not right i´v just done the last months multiple projects parallel. i´ve absorbed every critics on my last song like a spoon, and in the final result i´ve redone the complete mastering in this project
http://tnp.madtracker.net/TNP_Nautical.mp3
i´m really interested in your comments  |
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StyrmanLjungberg
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Joined: 03 Feb 2006
Location: Östersund, Sweden
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Posted: Tue May 29 2007 17:55
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Nice harmonies! =)
Mixing is ok, didn't listen that well though
Spice up the drums a little, they get kinda boring sometimes! Other then that, great work! =) |
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Sunbuster
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Joined: 05 May 2003
Location: Finland
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Posted: Tue May 29 2007 19:06
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What StyrmanLjungberg said and...
I'd say the rubber duckish bass line is perhaps a bit too penetrating. It could have more bass, less high frequencies. Don't cut them away though, just perhaps dampen them a bit to bring out the bass a bit more. The kick could use more power, more of a low bass also. Other than that you seem to be pretty reverb-happy. I'd tone down on the reverb a bit, because now the track sounds as if it's trying to bring out some form of dooms day vibe (which it it's almost, but not quite) and the lead sounds as if it's trying to be more than it is
Overall a nice piece, but not something I'd burn on a CD and tell my friends about, if you know what I mean  |
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Lord_Nighthawk
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Joined: 06 Feb 2007
Location: Germany
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Posted: Sun Jun 03 2007 09:37
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i definatly understand
as long as i don´t work at just one project, the nautical one got frozen (to get my mind free from it for the first) and i restarted the "sinful night" one (that i stopped in it´s first remix-release form here). i tried to work out every suggestion in the sinful night i got on the nautical one (where i basically see my mistakes now very clear) so the sinful night should be a hopefully improved dance track (i got some pre-opinions from 2 friends who said that this definatly does NOT sound like a normal lord nighthawk track )
stay tuned, release will follow in 0-5 days  |
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