well, as i dunno like house music very much, i still had an ear on the technical side of your track. sounds very good so far, the high "pings" you sometimes implent could use a bit more damping or more attack - had a short "beep" in my ear as i listened to it with volume turned on high.
thanks for the feedback everyone
im pretty pleased with how it turned out, it works well on the dancefloor by all accounts which is what it was aimed at.
ill be sure to post my next one (starting it tonight).