Thanks for the critique Amok - need more people like you responding. I know the Soft brass ensemble seems to be repetitive, but that's how the music in this genre (rap) is, haha. It wouldn't be as noticeable of course if it had lyrics behind it...
Yeah that pretty much sums it up. Also what is up with that sine floating around the place? It seems to be in tune only sometimes. The harpsichords second phrase doesn't fit with the minimal melodies of the rest.
I like the bass, brass and hits. Real cool. But I think you could put more variation in there even if it's hip hop.
i was waiting for something but nothing happened. i think you have great potential. but like frazze said, the track needs some variation to make it real good...