I like it. The melodies are nice and fluid and it has a relaxed mood.
Improvements could be made in production. Try tweaking the Vsts to get the sounds to fit your song better. For instance the delay on instrument 1 in the opening is to heavy.
Joined: 27 Dec 2005
Location: The Netherlands, Wezep
Posted: Wed Jan 02 2008 15:02
Amok wrote:
Thanks.
I dont really like the start, too. just was playing around with the delay coz the opening sound so boring and i hsve no idea how to spice it up...
Throw in a big hit, crash thing whatever with a little bit of delay on it, or a sweep .. or.. oor... orrr.. so many ways to start, or just start with a kick+ snare, add highhats 1 offbeat 1 funky one hitting more frequent in a strange rythm, some FX here and there..