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Third bitjam compo submission, fred- dear rob (remix)

plugexpert
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Joined: 24 Nov 2005

Posted: Wed Sep 23 2009 00:23 Third bitjam compo submission, fred- dear rob (remix)
My third and last bitjam compo submission van be found here: http://soundcloud.com/plugexpert/fred-dear-rob-plugexpert-remix Let me know what you think! Grts R
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MagnarTBL
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Joined: 18 Jan 2005
Location: Ronneby, Sweden

Posted: Thu Sep 24 2009 07:09
Positive: It shows you've putted a lot of work into it! The melody, arpeggios etc. Negative: The different beat-loops and the main choice of samples/instruments kind of ruins it for me. Too screamy. Change suggestion: Adjust the overall song tempo speed a few bpm's downward - right now it feels like the whole song is on fast-forward play. Redo the drum beats, and review all samples to fit more closely together. Add master limiting to the stereo output. Add track reverbs/delays, compressions, eq's etc to make the overall sound picture work better between the intruments. Good luck in the compo! Cheers Magnar

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plugexpert
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Joined: 24 Nov 2005

Posted: Sun Sep 27 2009 03:13
Thnx for the tips magnar, you are absolutely right on the mixing! I tried fixing it today, but ended up mashing the whole piece into a fieldrecording! If anyone is interested, listen to the transformation here: http://soundcloud.com/richard-jonas/richard-jonas-coldplay-in-goffertpark The fred remix is the layer of electronic sounds in the fieldrecording piece.
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