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Breaker
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10 2007 13:43    
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hi there fellow mad-t's =)


This is my latest track i wanted to share with you Smile


The mixing might not be perfect... but ow well, enjoy:



http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=2276BAB140233B2C



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Psalm 97
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10 2007 22:54    
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Fine tune the panning in the first part. Is too erratic, too disconcerting.

Otherwise, good tune. If that's the only thing I can fine wrong with it, perfectionist that I am, you're way too cool. Cool

Only what is done for Christ will last.
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bigandymac
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10 2007 23:26    
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really like some of the melodies in this tune, especially around 2:40.
everything is great apart from the beat imo, dont like the samples youve used really. but thats my taste.
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Nine
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11 2007 22:18    
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The beat 'problem' is my fault I guess, Saturn is a really good friend of mine and he made the first part of this song on my computer, with beat samples on my computer hehe. And I don't really have good beat samples, sorry Saturn Wink Razz

Well, some critics from me. Some parts I haven't heard yet, are quite nice. I really love the structure in your song and admire it, nice automation too. Although I think it's a little too long, but not annoying long, because it's not über boring or something. The melody really sticks in my head and won't come out. That is a good thing ofcourse Wink

In short: A good tune, one of your best so far.

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Frazze
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12 2007 18:03    
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A solid 80'ies sound. Razz

I feel this song should either have more melodies and prehaps vocals or be tuned down by useing a less prominent beat. I think now it's an okay listening song, but not a great one as I think it could be. If the drums didn't take so much attention it would be a nice chill tune.

Eh... I'm not getting my point though, hope you get it. Nice going. Smile

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Breaker
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12 2007 23:50    
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@ psalm 97: thnx dude Smile

@ Andy, Nine, Frazze:
thnx, hehe i overdid it a little with the drums =P...
May tone them down a bit

I was going for a Flying steps kinda tune (to breakdance on =P) definitely going to do more attempts Smile
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